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Your face turned a tomato red, you covered it hoping he wasn't watching, good thing there was no mirrors in your room, you stood up and made your way over to the bed, you held onto your back trying to forget about the pain, you laid down and stared at the wall, listening to the voices and laughter, you could here someone singing a song, the song went like this.


"Round and round the mulberry bush
The monkey chased the weasel.
The monkey stopped to pull up his socks
And Pop goes the weasel"

You soon started to hum the toon, but then started to join in, singing with the strange man, minutes passed and you were still going, soon you realized he stopped, so you stopped as well, he started laughing and yelled "your pretty good, doll!"
You hated being called nicknames but you just smiled, you rolled over and closed your eyes, you wanted to get some sleep before dinner, but you were a little late.
A man came in "dinner time!!" You sighed and got up, he untied your arms and pushed you into the cafeteria, you got your food and sat down.

You started looking around, you could see a whole bunch of new people, "must have come in yesterday.." You thought to yourself. You looked around again, looking for the guy who stabbed you, but couldn't, they must have brought him somewhere else...you started to eat, until a man sa down across from you, you looked up "can I help you?" He laughed "no...I just came here to tell you that, I really loved the way ou sang" he gave you a crooked smiled, you felt so awkward that you couldn't answer him back. He held out his hand "my names Jack....Laughing Jack..." You shook his hand and then continued to stare into his....eyes..."you are?" He asked laughing..."m...m....my names (insert name here)" he smiled again "such a beautiful name for such a beautiful girl" you took your hand and opened it, he gave you some candy...

"Erm...thanks?" Some doctors came by, they took the candy from you "Jack come with us" he walked away with one of the doctors, while the other stayed with you "don't you ever....ever! Take candy from him...okay" she walked away leaving you alone. You finished eating you dinner and stood up, one of the doctors came to take you too your room, "w..wait" you said "I...I need to go to the bathroom..." The doctor sighed and took you to a different door "hurry up" he said as he opened it, you walked in shutting the door behind you, you locked it, you looked into the mirror "BEN.." You whispered, seconds later he appeared smiling "hi..(insert name here)" oh blushed "d...do you really love me?" He blushed, still smiling "does this answer your question?" He leaned forward half his body out of the mirror, then...

Your lips met with his....
There will be a lot of creepypasta's showing up in the story now.

BEN (c) Jadusable
Laughing Jack (c) *SnuffBomb
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:iconxxinvaderamberxx:
XxInvaderAmberxX Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Well... That escalated quickly...
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:iconigame101:
IGame101 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
agreed
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:iconlasean:
LaSean Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So the characters:
Laughing Jack
Jeff the Killer 
Ben Drowned
Me
And any others?
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:iconpolybrrr:
polybrrr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Enchant: *Enters Ben's mind making him feel drowned* GET OFF LOST!

Lost: UHHGGGG WTF BEN!
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Elvira-Slender Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Elvira: ...BEN...? Wtf?
Admin: *waves at laughing Jack*
Elvira: *in shock*
Admin: Elvira!!!
Elvira: W-What?!
Admin: Do you like BEN?
Elvira: Maybe.... But i love my Jeffy still.... That backstabber...
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cutechibicat Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
why can't I eat candy?
so mean........ I'LL DESTROY ALL CANDY STEALING PEOPLE!!!!!
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JellyBean10 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Soo many pastas in the psycho warddd! PSYCHO PARTAYYY!!!
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:iconwhatevsworks:
whatevsworks Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Slender: *tries to pokerface*
*pats shoulder* it ok.... slendy is an idiot.... not us.....
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:iconjellybean10:
JellyBean10 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay~
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:iconwhatevsworks:
whatevsworks Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
BAD SLENDY!!!
YOURE SUPPOSED TO BE SMART!!!
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